Shiver
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Post by Shiver on May 12, 2008 11:04:39 GMT 10
This comic is the best so far. The 7th and 8th panel made me go "Keh".
And try a smaller text. I use Arial, size 9, bold.
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Post by boyue on May 12, 2008 11:37:50 GMT 10
Okay, I'm working on the next comic.
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Post by Interrobang Pie on May 12, 2008 15:43:16 GMT 10
ACK PILLOW SHADING ON THE EYE-TWITCH THING.
And the mouth is still bad on Cream. It's better if you don't use mouths at all (but it's fine for close-ups, but don't use a big red circle, use a small black box. 3*2 should do for panels 3, 5 and 7. The mouth in 1 is fine.
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Crash
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Post by Crash on May 12, 2008 20:36:12 GMT 10
Why are you using SkyLights' Chaos sprites? They don't fit with the Advance sprites. Use the Battle sprites of him.
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Post by boyue on May 13, 2008 7:35:48 GMT 10
I already made, like, 20 comics using that. I can't change it right now.
And I usually use small squares for the mouths.
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on May 13, 2008 7:41:59 GMT 10
It isn't fully necessary to edit in a mouth. I hardly ever do so and it still gets the same effect.
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Post by spyrofox on May 13, 2008 8:04:26 GMT 10
But It looks a hell of a lot better. Along with other Expressions. =P
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Post by boyue on May 13, 2008 9:00:36 GMT 10
Thank you.
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Post by spyrofox on May 13, 2008 9:04:59 GMT 10
For... What...?
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Post by boyue on May 13, 2008 11:25:55 GMT 10
...IDK...
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Post by Interrobang Pie on May 13, 2008 15:44:19 GMT 10
IDK? What's wrong with typed I don't know?
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Post by boyue on May 14, 2008 6:58:27 GMT 10
...ISDK...
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Post by boyue on May 14, 2008 8:23:58 GMT 10
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Post by D00D64: AM I GONE OR WHAT on May 14, 2008 8:51:34 GMT 10
GOOD LORD THERE IS A CHOO CHOO TRAIN THAT LOOKS LIKE A MAN TEARING THOUGH THE ARK
This comic is now a 3/5.
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Post by boyue on May 14, 2008 11:26:58 GMT 10
Thank you.
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