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Post by boyue on May 2, 2008 11:08:05 GMT 10
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Post by Interrobang Pie on May 2, 2008 15:40:55 GMT 10
Is that Cream enlarged big and shouting?
Also, AAA is a type of battery. *steals* AAAH is a yelp.
EDIT: Dairy products - I really can't imagine dairy flavours. And strawberries aren't dairy products. And vanilla's a plant. S'pose Cheese and Cream works.
Wait, why am I going on about this anyway?
And wheres Knuckles in the 3rd frame?
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Post by Crash on May 2, 2008 16:21:48 GMT 10
- Bad speech bubbles.
- Make Cream's and Teen Cream's text colors different. The fourth panel confused me because I thought it was Cream shouting.
- Use Advance BGs with Advance sprites.
- Typos.
- See O-TC's last sentence.
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Post by CoolCorky on May 3, 2008 1:09:58 GMT 10
Crappy, Times New Roman speech bubbles.
Typo(s).
Pathetic attempt at being funny.
Bitmixing.
Dreadfully resized fire sprites.
Knuckles missing in Panel 3.
And the panels have an erratic arrangement. Make the spaces in between them the same.
And to say this is #39, I dread to hink what the rest are like...
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Post by boyue on May 3, 2008 5:35:50 GMT 10
There's 10 more to look at. And I forgot to put Knuckles in there.
I'll see if I can mess with the word bubbles after the 50th comic, because that will be starting season two. And don't go all " Hey, dipwad! Comics don't have seasons!", I know that. It's just fun to make seasons.
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Post by D00D64: AM I GONE OR WHAT on May 3, 2008 6:07:39 GMT 10
And don't go all " Hey, dipwad! Comics don't have seasons!", I know that. It's just fun to make seasons. ...What do you mean they didn't? Some do you know. Heck, chapters kind of count as seasons too. |
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Post by CoolCorky on May 3, 2008 6:23:20 GMT 10
Just take a look at SCFH.
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on May 3, 2008 6:41:41 GMT 10
WTBBFAHF (despite not being updated since February) is spanning 3 Episodes at least.
OSHI-spoiler
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Post by CoolCorky on May 3, 2008 6:47:13 GMT 10
WTBBFAHF? I can vaguely remember what that was about.
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on May 3, 2008 7:30:44 GMT 10
..Yeah, I really need to finish #1.10 and Episode 1 as a whole.... >_>;;;;
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Post by Interrobang Pie on May 3, 2008 18:51:07 GMT 10
BNI came in waves. <.<
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Post by Oberstleutnant Insipid on May 3, 2008 19:36:34 GMT 10
Just take a look at SCFH. Yay, I'm appreciated! ;D |
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Post by Rhinoce Breakdancerus on May 4, 2008 8:01:49 GMT 10
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Post by boyue on May 4, 2008 11:59:12 GMT 10
I know it's unoriginal. It's just that I made it up before I remembered about it. When I did, it,well, just stuck to the comic. No one really cared. Update!:  Srry for blank space, don't complain. |
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Post by dynamicsonic on May 4, 2008 13:05:08 GMT 10
No fun
No jokes
No order
No Story
No good balloons
No Bit-Matching Eggman
No Bit-Matching Background
No Explanation about the boo
No need for self insert
I guess I'm TURNING JAPANESE!
Cookie for ref. Roby might know this one
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