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Post by The Pletch on May 9, 2008 7:02:43 GMT 10
I see you didn't pick up on the sarcasm.
Crotchkicks are overused slapstick, in addition to the kick itself being highly expected. That wasn't funny.
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Post by boyue on May 9, 2008 7:44:10 GMT 10
Oh, I was just confused with the first word. Update again. LOLZ  Oh, Silver is on a quest to kill Mephiles, because he found 3 Ibliss Triggers, so Metal Sonic wants to help. Metal Sonic stole a piece of Black doom's clothes, thinking it was a time machine. Here's two comics about that. [glow=red,2,300]DON'T RATE THESE.[/glow]This is the original look BTW.  And this is the beta current layout look BTW.  |
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on May 9, 2008 8:34:59 GMT 10
Bitmixing.
If you're gonna use Advance sprites, for the love of God use Advance or any other 32-bit background. Only very few 16-bit backgrounds will work.
If you can't find a decent background for the scene, just piece one together yourself (Preferrably all of it being the same bittage, in this case, 32). Yes, it takes a lot more time, but it'll look better in the end.
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Post by boyue on May 9, 2008 10:30:35 GMT 10
Which comic? The latest one?
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Post by spyrofox on May 9, 2008 10:50:37 GMT 10
Yes. Emerald Hill is 16-bit.
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Post by boyue on May 9, 2008 12:08:12 GMT 10
I kind of noticed that. I'll change it. '-'
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Post by CoolCorky on May 10, 2008 1:27:04 GMT 10
The new layout sucks balls. You could at least have all of the panels aligned to a grid, to make it look a bit less slapdash.
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Post by somebody probably on May 10, 2008 3:46:00 GMT 10
"DON'T RATE THESE."
I don't. :\
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Post by Interrobang Pie on May 10, 2008 5:13:02 GMT 10
Meh, bitmixing is still bad, but 32-bit sprites in a 16-bit FG/BG is better than vice versa.
THAS NEEDS DEBITITISATION
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Post by somebody probably on May 10, 2008 7:43:20 GMT 10
Um, anyway, crits.
Give your speech bubbles outlines. It's really easy to do.
Don't use a seriffed font in comics, it looks silly.
Make text first, and draw a speech bubble to match it, don't do it the other way around, it looks crap.
Using more than one exclamation mark is a no-no, it looks stupid and unprofessional.
Make funny things.
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Post by boyue on May 10, 2008 11:40:31 GMT 10
Update.  For the love of god, let me get to 51 before you rate anymore! I have new speech bubbles and stuff. |
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Post by boyue on May 11, 2008 2:49:14 GMT 10
Oh, I mean the constructive critism is okay, but I'm feeling bad because people aren't thinking I'm going to use their advice. I already did, and I don't promise it to be totaly awsome, just a little bit better.  Oh, really short storyline, really. Only two comics of the storyline. Just had to make a filler. And time for 50th, weeeee. -_-  |
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Post by boyue on May 11, 2008 8:49:22 GMT 10
OKay, I'm trying to sort out the speech bubbles some more.  Crud, Jerald was supposed to say ends. |
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Post by Shiver on May 11, 2008 8:57:33 GMT 10
So are you gonna wait until the 101th issue to try out rounded rectangle speech bubbles?
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Post by boyue on May 11, 2008 9:13:11 GMT 10
Uh, know. Does people want me to do those?
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