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Post by spyrofox on Nov 13, 2008 8:02:21 GMT 10
This place is in desperate need of new comics. But that's not why this one was made. This was made... Out of boredom. Discription: The planet has blown up into 7 pieces, each continent on a seperate section. Who's the only one with the power to put it all back togetjer somehow? None other than Sonic the Hedgehog. With help from some other furrys of course.First Comic  Nothing to say really, just crits plz. |
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Post by Admiral Mundane on Nov 13, 2008 12:17:03 GMT 10
It's not funny (if you're even trying to make it funny. I couldn't tell.)
Also, you spelled "together" wrong.
And "description"
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Post by spyrofox on Nov 13, 2008 12:26:24 GMT 10
Jeez, does EVERYTHING have to be funny? =/
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Post by Oberstleutnant Insipid on Nov 13, 2008 14:18:24 GMT 10
Too short. There isn't much buildup at all.
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Post by Interrobang Pie on Nov 14, 2008 16:57:42 GMT 10
You spelt possibly wrong. And Sonic. And I. And *shot*
And what is the pink thing at the edge of panel 3?
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Post by spyrofox on Nov 14, 2008 23:48:34 GMT 10
Eh, I can't please you people here. *Insert fake emo rant here*
That being said, it makes it easier to avoid this place.
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Post by Naem on Nov 15, 2008 0:29:32 GMT 10
And what is the pink thing at the edge of panel 3? That's a Chao. Sorry, Spyrofox, but this comic just looks like a bad fanfic right now. Then again, it IS just the first comic, so we should probably see more in order to judge it better, eh? |
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Post by D00D64: AM I GONE OR WHAT on Nov 15, 2008 0:38:12 GMT 10
K, critique: If it's supposed to be SIRIUS, than it's not going anywhere, and feels cut off and incomplete. It doesn't feel tied tot he actual game at all (Wasn't Sonic supposed to be at Eggy's base now?) Also, the events of Sonic '06 never happened, thanks to the games one redeeming story point; Eliese erases the moments from history. And why is the Chao next to Tails not surprised at all at the sight of Sonic being taken away? Sonic also looks almost NOTHING like the wherehog. See, boredom is like a roulette; You have NO idea what the hell is gonna happen. In this case, it's nothing good. At all. Eh, I can't please you people here. It's called "Standards" SpyroF. Most Smackjeevers don't have them. I give this comic a 2... ...Out of 5. Also, THERE ARE MORE ISSUES THERE YOU GUYS. CLICK THE BANNER AT THE TOP. |
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Post by Rhinoce Breakdancerus on Nov 15, 2008 5:04:01 GMT 10
Cheer up. I mean, there's one good thing about your comic...
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The banners are nice.
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Post by ShardNet on Nov 15, 2008 5:47:11 GMT 10
Cheer up. I mean, there's one good thing about your comic... ... .... ... .... ... .... ... The banners are nice. Actually, the banners are pretty damn awesome. XD |
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