PK the Hedgehog
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I made that Fakemon! :D
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Post by PK the Hedgehog on May 19, 2008 22:41:46 GMT 10
Meh. Smash Bros. Fan-Fic. I was bored. I put next to no effort into it. Is there a light at the end of this tunnel, or is it, again, a dead end? PrologueChapter 1 |
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Post by CoolCorky on May 20, 2008 1:44:32 GMT 10
Before I even read this, I need you to confirm a few things:
- Is it well punctuated? What about spellings?
- Does it involve you?
- Do the characters remain in character? (So Sonic = Laid back, full of himself, etc.)
If anyone can confir these for me, I MIGHT read it.
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Post by boyue on May 20, 2008 11:31:10 GMT 10
It's awsome. Un-named character in dome(Not telling ho obvious), R.O.B.s unable to know what "free" means, and purple aura. That's it in a nutshell without spoiling it.
You should really read it!
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Post by Breaker on May 20, 2008 12:42:58 GMT 10
I had my suspisions; but after reading the prologue, I must say I am intrigued. Of course, there's always the chance you'll screw it up later, PK.
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PK the Hedgehog
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I made that Fakemon! :D
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Post by PK the Hedgehog on May 20, 2008 21:41:14 GMT 10
Wow... um... thanks...
Sweet. I actually made something that doesn't suck!
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Post by Oberstleutnant Insipid on May 20, 2008 21:59:25 GMT 10
I like it.
BUT
You need way more description.
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Post by Squirrel Hero on May 20, 2008 22:26:13 GMT 10
Wow... um... thanks... Sweet. I actually made something that doesn't suck! Everyone can make something that does not suck. Just put effort into it. We can't really hate it because you made it. Some of us expect you to screw up later though. |
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PK the Hedgehog
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I made that Fakemon! :D
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Post by PK the Hedgehog on May 27, 2008 22:03:43 GMT 10
CHAPTUH WUN EEZ HEER. DIGESTIFY IT WITH UR BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAINS!
Or read it if you prefer...
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Post by ShardNet on May 27, 2008 22:24:12 GMT 10
Meh. Smash Bros. Fan-Fic. I was bored. I put next to no effort into it. Is there a light at the end of this tunnel, or is it, again, a dead end? PrologueChapter 1I'll read it later, but for future reference, never say "I did this out of boredom" if you expect people to take it seriously. |
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Post by dynamicsonic on May 28, 2008 8:25:57 GMT 10
Finally, something interesting from PK. I never thought I'd said that in my entire life. I hope this continues to go well.
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Hayden
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Post by Hayden on Jun 21, 2008 4:52:24 GMT 10
Bump to remind PK to write chapter 2.
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Eco
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SV is pretty dead. Saddening. Skype/Steam/XBL: EcoReck Twitter: @BM_Eco
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Post by Eco on Jun 21, 2008 5:05:25 GMT 10
Unnessecary bump
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Post by The Pletch on Jun 23, 2008 0:34:38 GMT 10
*unnecessary
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Post by Squirrel Hero on Jun 24, 2008 7:03:44 GMT 10
CheeseDay the Grammar Nazi?
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