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Post by X on Sept 25, 2007 12:14:58 GMT 10
Everyone failed to mention that the new speech bubbles look like crap with crap coming out of it.
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Post by Fiery on Sept 25, 2007 12:53:54 GMT 10
Everyone failed to mention that the new speech bubbles look like crap with crap coming out of it. Rather bluntly pu- OH MY LORD. Alright. Supersonicdjs... Look around at other comics. Any comic you can find. Webcomics, newspaper comics.. I don't care. Compare quality. Is this REALLY the type of work you want to represent yourself with? I understand if you really want to put something out there for people to see, but it'd be MUCH better if you...Refined your methods a bit before doing so. Sorry. These are crap. |
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Post by Interrobang Pie on Sept 25, 2007 16:06:50 GMT 10
THAT IS ABSOULTELY FROOGLING HUGE!
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Post by 4d3d3d3 on Sept 26, 2007 5:13:21 GMT 10
A comic with just a boring plotline doesn't do anything. There has to be a little drama or humor mixed in with it.
And before you ask, no, it's not funny.
Still, it's getting better. Not by much, though.
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Supersonicdjs
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Post by Supersonicdjs on Sept 26, 2007 8:00:04 GMT 10
It isnt supposed to be funny. I NEVER said it was supposed to be funny. I just said i made a comic. There just coincedentally funny panels of life in a order with certain hilarity issues.
There just simple insults and outbursts as a comic.
Heres the next comic strip plot:
Sonic and amy bvump into tails and then a portal shows up in front of them. A hand comes out of the portal and grabs sonic by the neck! The hand pulls him in as tails, knuckles, and shadow jump into the portaland land in Onett, where mario greets them and tells them about mysterious portals sprouting all over the place. They have to destroy the main core and Venture into various worlds to beat the bosses and triumph!
Interesting, huh?
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Post by D00D64: AM I GONE OR WHAT on Sept 26, 2007 10:11:15 GMT 10
No.
^Honest response
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Post by Supersonicdjs on Sept 26, 2007 10:57:37 GMT 10
How come all you self-Concerned guys always do this stuff?
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Post by D00D64: AM I GONE OR WHAT on Sept 26, 2007 10:59:17 GMT 10
Oh, thats not it. It's just too run-of-the-mill for me. Your average crossover.
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Post by iBishyT on Sept 26, 2007 11:17:45 GMT 10
Sonic: "HEY TAILS!"
Amy: "Despite the fact that i'm a lustful whore, I shall stop chasing Sonic because Tails is here, and I wouldn't want to ruin his virgin eyes."
Tails : "H-"
*PORTALLLLLLL*
Sonic: "OH EM GEE! A PORTAL!"
[Meanwhile, on the other side]
Dude 1: "Dude! Check it out!"
Dude 2: "Holy crap, it worked!"
D1: "We've finally accomplished the science of opening a portal to an alternate dimension!"
D2: "A true scientific success!"
D1: "What shall we do now that we have perfected this technology?"
D2: "Hey look! A talking headgehog! GRAB IT BY THE NECK!"
This is seriously what goes through my mind whenever I see someone try to do a sprite comic that involves a portal opening JUST as a character was introduced, and when Sonic JUST SO HAPPENS to be there, and ends up getting himself grabbed by some unknown being who rather than celebrate the fact that he just mastered this technology or make friends with the alternate universe, decides to grab them without warning and drag them into a different dimension entirely, usually that of a different game (90% of the time being Mario).
Seriously dude, if you desperately want to do a serious sprite comic (which in itself is looked down upon), make it original and interesting.
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Post by The Pletch on Sept 26, 2007 11:28:09 GMT 10
Bishy wins the thread.
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Post by Supersonicdjs on Sept 26, 2007 11:44:44 GMT 10
Actually, no.It will be knuckles. Weve seen him already, havent we? Hes tricked by BOWSER this time and all the villains everywhere are teaming up to get the emeralds, stars, triforce, and time stones so they can rule over THE MUSHROOM MOBIRULE.
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Post by The Pletch on Sept 26, 2007 11:54:07 GMT 10
...No. Just...just no. That's not even cohesive, let alone serious. Scrap the plot, make a new one entirely.
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Post by Supersonicdjs on Sept 26, 2007 12:12:54 GMT 10
Its changed. Sonic randomly runs into a portal and amy gets mad at who did it so she jumps in the portal. Tails jumps into the portal. Metal sonic overlooks the portal and transports to dr eggman to tell him the news. Mario explains to sonic what happened in peachs castle.
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Post by Breaker on Sept 26, 2007 12:17:28 GMT 10
CROSSOVERS = NO.
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Post by Supersonicdjs on Sept 26, 2007 12:18:05 GMT 10
Dont judge a book by its cover.
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