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Post by Interrobang Pie on Oct 5, 2007 4:43:52 GMT 10
I NEVER SAID IT WOULD BE FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah, but seriously, it's slightly better, but still really really bad. |
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Post by Supersonicdjs on Oct 5, 2007 6:53:14 GMT 10
It just looks sloppy cause of the oversized mario, relax.
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Post by ShardNet on Oct 5, 2007 7:27:45 GMT 10
Uh...
No. You've wasted 12 pages of our time.
Either make something good and take the advice/anger in stride, or leave. If you post it here, you've got to accept that we're going to tell our opinions. Nobody here is your mother. ( Hopefully )
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Post by Breaker on Oct 5, 2007 7:53:17 GMT 10
It just looks sloppy cause of the oversized mario, relax. COMPARE: My first comics: sonicveg.proboards22.com/index.cgi?board=hoax&action=display&thread=1111864949Your first comic: i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee270/Koopaman/SonicComic5SupriseAuthor.jpgDespite my lack of speech bubbles, notice how the quality of mine is of a much higher level than yours. Also, it's made in Paint. So, here's what you need to do first: 1. Resize your panels, 240 x 160 pixels is best. 2. Don't bit-mix (i.e. No Genesis sprites on a GBA background). 3. Your comic is too blurry. If the comic is blurry, you're doing it wrong. 4. Reread your script to yourself aloud. If you don't even crack a smile, or if you grimace in pain, best try it again. 5. Criticism is a GOOD THING, take it from the art student. 6. Quit over-reacting. You look like an 8-year-old with mentality issues. |
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Post by Supersonicdjs on Oct 5, 2007 9:02:58 GMT 10
Im just saying ONE TINY LITTLE COMPLIMENT will encourage me to make comics.
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Oct 5, 2007 9:15:31 GMT 10
SSDJS, sometimes you have to cruel to be kind. If you make something bad and only one person says they like it, despite all the other people saying it needs improving - esp. when they give suggestions - you go with the majority.
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Post by eddo on Oct 5, 2007 9:24:21 GMT 10
Also, if you want your comic to be good, just take your time. Take Breaker's LOL Waffles for example. Breaker polishes the comic and fixes things wrong with it to make it good. And it ends up great every time. But with your comic, you're usually giving us stuff once a week. With all good comics, there's usually a longer period of time before a new comic is released. Look at Doomsday's SCFH. It takes a pretty long time for her to make a comic, but they always look great and everyone loves them. Even I'm working on a comic, but I'm taking my time to make it good. If you just stopped to look back and make your comics better, people would like them better. And if you take advice and critisism the right way, that would help,too. So just go slow to make everything look good, and the chances are, you'll improve.
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Post by Breaker on Oct 5, 2007 9:26:28 GMT 10
Im just saying ONE TINY LITTLE COMPLIMENT will encourage me to make comics. Anybody else notice how this sounds like Shazzo? |
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Post by Supersonicdjs on Oct 5, 2007 10:13:31 GMT 10
Heres the next one:  Its Resized. New Banner! |
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Post by Oberstleutnant Insipid on Oct 5, 2007 10:17:13 GMT 10
The size is okay, but the humour is still crap, it makes no sense, and the text is still too big.
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Post by eddo on Oct 5, 2007 10:19:38 GMT 10
If you use someone's sprites, give credit.
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Post by D00D64: AM I GONE OR WHAT on Oct 5, 2007 10:21:03 GMT 10
Why is everything blurry? Why is this thing not funny OR serious? What is up with this? What's going on? Why?
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Post by The Pletch on Oct 5, 2007 11:07:47 GMT 10
If you're trying to be funny, you're failing miserably at it. If you're trying to be serious, you're failing even more. If you're not really trying for anything at all, damn it, you're STILL failing.  |
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Post by Supersonicdjs on Oct 5, 2007 11:41:06 GMT 10
I have a question for you. Why do i even bother?
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Post by eddo on Oct 5, 2007 11:44:24 GMT 10
Don't be that upset. Just practice and take advice to improve, that's all everyone's trying to say.
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