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Post by iBishyT on Oct 8, 2007 0:37:45 GMT 10
DE STIJL!
Recent one is great and quite clever. You're definately improving with this.
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Post by Supersonicdjs on Oct 14, 2007 6:14:08 GMT 10
I need advice on how to make comics like this one! Ill... Ill create one kinda like this but with the full name, SOLANACO! Then, it will go somewhere!
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Oct 14, 2007 9:06:25 GMT 10
I need advice on how to make comics like this one! Ill... Ill create one kinda like this but with the full name, SOLANACO! Then, it will go somewhere! ..Mr. Forehead, meet Mr. Desk. There's a thread here about humour in comics; read it. |
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Post by Rhinoce Breakdancerus on Oct 14, 2007 11:52:08 GMT 10
(Reads Solanco's Comics Topic)
(Reads The Adventure of Link and Mario Topic)
(Groans)
And yet, I feel less bloodthirsty and I feel like saying what many better than I have attempted to say:
1) Improve Your Sprite Skills: There are sites and tutorials on the web that explain in full detail. Read them. Treat your frames as individual hoaxes which will be scrutinized for accuracy by others. To get an idea of what critics look for, read hoax topics on SV.
2) Improve Your Humor: Jokes you know are good. Inside jokes are good too, if you know them. Funny observations in life are also acceptible. Improv comedy is a great skill to acquire. If it wasn't for Cheesy's insulting comment on my humor style, I wouldn't have been on the story arc I'm on now.
3) Improve Your Grammar and Literary Skills: Doesn't matter how funny your writing is. If no one understands it, no one reads it. Pay attention in English. READ your textbook. It may be rectangular and cushy, but that doesn't mean it's a pillow. Worst case scenario, type it in MS Word and let the spell check and grammar check catch it. Also helps to know literature, literary terms, and have an understanding on a famous writer's style (word choice and literary devices used to tell a story). There's a reason that you can tell a difference between Dave Barry, William Faulkner, and e. e. cummings.
I don't think there's anything more I can say that anyone has said before. If you still don't know what you're doing wrong, then I really don't know what else I can say.
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Post by Rhinoce Breakdancerus on Oct 14, 2007 13:49:46 GMT 10
 C&C, you know the drill. |
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Post by Oberstleutnant Insipid on Oct 14, 2007 14:44:06 GMT 10
I don't get it. Love the fox's uniform though. Maybe I could borrow him for SCFH.  |
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Post by iBishyT on Oct 15, 2007 1:27:52 GMT 10
I need advice on how to make comics like this one! Ill... Ill create one kinda like this but with the full name, SOLANACO! Then, it will go somewhere! ..Mr. Forehead, meet Mr. Desk. There's a thread here about humour in comics; read it. Wow, my thread got referenced to. =3 And sonicdjs... we've been facking trying to for the last couple of weeks or so! You just don't facking listen or heed any of that advice, and due to that, you're sprite comics are just as KIPPERLY as my dog with diarrhea. |
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Post by CoolCorky on Oct 15, 2007 4:51:34 GMT 10
C&C, you know the drill. I love the custom banner for each one. But what happened to all those people (e.g: Me.) that submitted their sprites to be in it? |
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Post by Rhinoce Breakdancerus on Oct 16, 2007 3:58:31 GMT 10
Originally, I was going to do this long story arc about the lawsuit. But I realized people like seeing themselves in comics, so I decided to try to shorten the story arc so it ends this month. When my serious Poe comic comes out, you should start seeing yourself in Slapdash. My idea is to do Usher II (Poe comic) and Slapdash being the humorous behind the scenes of Usher II. So, if you submitted sprites, wait until the end of November. If you want to be in only Usher II, but not Slapdash, let me know. If you're only in Slapdash, but want to be in Usher II, let me know. I need one or two more people for that.
@ Dooms: The fox is Sawyer Steel, Sadistic Attorney at Law. He really doesn't have a sprite sheet yet. Maybe I should make one.
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Post by D00D64: AM I GONE OR WHAT on Oct 16, 2007 6:45:30 GMT 10
That is not a comic; it's just a place for Psy to dump his stuff. EDIT: ...Did he delete his post? |
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Post by PK the Hedgehog on Oct 16, 2007 6:48:39 GMT 10
Pee_Kay_Doz_Naht_Git_it
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Post by Admiral Mundane on Oct 16, 2007 7:18:19 GMT 10
That is not a comic; it's just a place for Psy to dump his stuff. EDIT: ...Did he delete his post? o.O Apparently I did, seeing as it isn't there. I know it's not a comic, but the name's still use the same word, slapdash, and that's it. |
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Post by The Pletch on Oct 23, 2007 12:22:10 GMT 10
BECAUSE PSYGUY SHOULD MATTER IN A WAY THAT IS NOT INFINITESIMAL AND INSIGNIFICANT AMIRITE
Also, the Mac/PC comic gave me genuine lulz.
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Post by D00D64: AM I GONE OR WHAT on Oct 23, 2007 20:19:24 GMT 10
...Bump much?
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Post by Rhinoce Breakdancerus on Oct 24, 2007 10:41:09 GMT 10
@xad: Noted now. Wasn't going for an original name. I just wanted a random name for my comic, typed "random" on an online thesarus (sp?) and I just liked Slapdash. Anywho...  C&C. |
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