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Post by Spocket on Aug 23, 2004 12:57:16 GMT 10
heh. my first sprite comic. i was bored so i made this.  comments? criticism? |
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Post by The Pletch on Aug 23, 2004 13:17:43 GMT 10
A few tips from a sprite comic author:
1. Remove the HUD
2. Please use text bubbles.
3. Don't edit the sprites too much from the regular. Your Sonic/Tails sprites look funny.
4. Remove all background objects. Heck, just find some plain Megadrive backgrounds somewhere.
Other than those, not bad. Reminds me a bit of Bob and George, with the silent panel at the end. With some work, you could amount to Cheesy Jabber/Spontaneous Combustion.
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Post by Stuart on Aug 24, 2004 12:11:23 GMT 10
thanks. ;D
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Post by Ashura on Aug 24, 2004 12:13:02 GMT 10
heh i got an idea how about making it work perhaps?
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Post by Spocket on Aug 24, 2004 16:52:01 GMT 10
ummmm....what?
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Post by D on Aug 25, 2004 13:22:36 GMT 10
A few tips from a sprite comic author: 1. Remove the HUD 2. Please use text bubbles. 3. Don't edit the sprites too much from the regular. Your Sonic/Tails sprites look funny. 4. Remove all background objects. Heck, just find some plain Megadrive backgrounds somewhere. Other than those, not bad. Reminds me a bit of Bob and George, with the silent panel at the end. With some work, you could amount to Cheesy Jabber/ Spontaneous Combustion. awww, someone remembers! its a pity i never bothered working on others in the series. after that first one i just didnt bother. i personly think my first one was good. anywho, not bad. agreeing with cheesy on the suggestions. |
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