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Post by decelerationtrauma on Jul 15, 2008 18:47:07 GMT 10
Well, my first hoaxes  Risar/Headdy in another game.  And another one...  Again...  zzzzz...  Well, this was a triumph, memes ahoy! So, what do you think? |
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Post by Vinushka on Jul 16, 2008 1:56:11 GMT 10
Well, where do I start...
The first one's actually pretty good. I bet nobody thought of that before, especially with Knuckles' Chaotix. But you should add the little spark/chain that unites the two rings to make it more realistic. 6/10.
Number two is...big. Reduce it to normal 320x224 and I'll pay it. Also...that cloud sort of sticks out. Is that supposed to do that? 9/10 if you make it the correct size.
Three...well, that's actually pretty cool. However, the life icon sucks balls. Make a better one, that thing looks like Ristar is a three-legged beast or something. Also, big. Reduce. 7/10 if size is corrected.
Four, Not bad, although Ristar doesn't seem to be connected to anyone. A bit perplexing. 6/10.
Five, I'm surprised nobody used that before. Although you could at least try to use Amy or some sort of female character if you're trying to fit the Portal theme. And, for once, correct size! 7/10.
Someone already did that one, and with the correct size. Can't quite piece who right now, but somebody else definitely made that already.
Overall, pretty good for a new guy. Keep on hoaxing, but remember to take screenshots in 320x224.
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Post by ShardNet on Jul 16, 2008 3:32:51 GMT 10
XD I like the companion cube one.
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Post by Hunter on Jul 16, 2008 11:55:45 GMT 10
Those look alright overall. The only problem i can see now is the screen size on some.
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Post by decelerationtrauma on Jul 16, 2008 21:54:28 GMT 10
The screen size was from taking screen shots on gens with a double window.
tried to resize in photoshop/bucket, but does anyone know how to resize them non blurry?
The portal hoax was just a side thing for a joke, but maybe I could make a title card/zone
Aperture science zone anyone?
Oh, also ristar in the level start is connected to pulseman doing his megaman thing, and there is a line between ristar/headdy, it's just hard to see.
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Post by radeon on Jul 16, 2008 22:11:41 GMT 10
Great hoaxes for a beginner.
Loved the Portal hoax. LOL CAKE
Ristar hoaxes are good.
Why is Ristar & Headdy VS Pulseman posted twice?
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Jul 17, 2008 6:03:20 GMT 10
Resize in Paint. Set the value to 50% in the Stretch/Skew option.
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Post by decelerationtrauma on Jul 17, 2008 22:50:58 GMT 10
New hoax! this time, my first 3-D  Looks a bit flat unfortunately EDIT: Acch! no hud! fix soon |
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Post by Hunter on Jul 18, 2008 0:02:37 GMT 10
Done before way too many times -2
Too flat -1
No hud -2
5/10
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Post by Oberstleutnant Insipid on Jul 19, 2008 18:09:06 GMT 10
#1 is flawless, I see nothing wrong with it.
#2, Pulseman is horribly resized and blurry. Ditto for Headdy.
#3, Headdy is resized and blurry, Ristar is blurry.
#4, I see no flaws.
#5 is interesting and I don't believe it has been done before.
Welcome to the forum, you've done a better job than most new hoaxers. I love your username too. Hope to see you as a regular.
EDIT: ach, ich nicht #6 sehen, es tut mir lied
#6: No HUD, but you have picked that up. The flat background cannot be helped, so it's actually pretty good. Nice work with the grass too.
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Post by decelerationtrauma on Jul 21, 2008 22:29:54 GMT 10
ok, so I've made a quick hoax to take a look at what sonic might have looked like on xbox live with bonus flashy effects & graphics  |
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Post by Oberstleutnant Insipid on Jul 21, 2008 23:12:59 GMT 10
It's pretty good, but the blur effect on Sonic looks strange, whereas the blur on the background is nice and goes along with the feel of the whole hoax.
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Post by Twilight Shadow on Jul 21, 2008 23:26:06 GMT 10
9.5/10
Nice HUD, but the life icon doesn't fit.
Un-blur sonic, and stick with the original S3 life icon, and I'll give it a 10
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Post by decelerationtrauma on Jul 21, 2008 23:55:39 GMT 10
k, fixed & with a better text placement for the sonic text, which is now shaded  I blurred sonic slightly, beacause it looked stupid, being fully blurred |
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Post by Twilight Shadow on Jul 22, 2008 0:28:48 GMT 10
I'll give you a full ten if you don't blur Sonic at all.
9.75/10
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