juurikas
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A rare find at SV! A Sonic hacker!! :)
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Post by juurikas on Jan 19, 2008 6:40:14 GMT 10
I have a new hoax here, factory zone(made in a rush): comments & critisizm is welcome.
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Crash
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Post by Crash on Jan 19, 2008 6:48:34 GMT 10
Needs a HUD.
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Post by Hunter on Jan 19, 2008 7:19:56 GMT 10
Yeah, and it is a bit plain.
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Post by CoolCorky on Jan 19, 2008 7:35:12 GMT 10
^Seconded. Most 16-bit sonic games had something like that background, but they also had a kind of panoramic background behind that.
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Post by Hunter on Jan 19, 2008 7:37:52 GMT 10
Most? I would say all of them.
EDIT: Also, i noticed the letters of the title card are unshaded
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Post by spyrofox on Jan 19, 2008 7:45:18 GMT 10
Good Eye Hunter. I didn't notice the Unshaded Letters. And Yus, Needs a hud.
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Post by soniclover on Jan 19, 2008 8:06:19 GMT 10
The purple circle behind the letters could use a shadow, too.
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juurikas
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Post by juurikas on Jan 19, 2008 21:28:45 GMT 10
sorry this was made in a rush ill post much better version soon.
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Crash
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Post by Crash on Jan 19, 2008 21:34:31 GMT 10
Protip: If your hoax is not ready, don't post it.
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juurikas
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Post by juurikas on Jan 19, 2008 22:48:43 GMT 10
it was until i accepted c&c anyway here it is and shading the sprites more is out of the question because i like them as they are: no title card: with title card: as always , c&c is welcome! ;D ;D ;D edit: credits to neopixel - the "V" letter credits to Metalkirby - sonic 3 title card font
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Crash
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Post by Crash on Jan 19, 2008 22:50:16 GMT 10
Nice, but I don't really like the title card. 8/10
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juurikas
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Post by juurikas on Jan 19, 2008 22:53:24 GMT 10
hey thats my original idea! i like my ideas....
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Post by Hunter on Jan 19, 2008 23:08:11 GMT 10
Better now.
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Post by Oberstleutnant Insipid on Jan 22, 2008 22:37:35 GMT 10
The text on the HUD is hard to see as it blends in with the background. hey thats my original idea! i like my ideas.... Well yes, but you said you're taking constructive criticism, which is what we're giving you.
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juurikas
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Post by juurikas on Jan 27, 2008 1:52:19 GMT 10
The text on the HUD is hard to see as it blends in with the background. hey thats my original idea! i like my ideas.... Well yes, but you said you're taking constructive criticism, which is what we're giving you. ok ill see what i can do with the title card.
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