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Post by CoolCorky on Oct 18, 2009 23:53:01 GMT 10
Partly owing to to my utter apathy towards the completion of Game Stew, and partly owing to the fact that I love the HL2 map in which you fight your first gunship, I have elected the create a comic about four rebels living at a refugee checkpoint known as "Seaside Refuge". I know the term "comic" implies it's going to be whizz-bang hilarity, but this is going to be a series with a serious storyline, and the term "graphic novel" didn't really seem appropriate. But anyway. Enjoy!  |
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Post by The Pletch on Oct 19, 2009 0:55:15 GMT 10
Hi, guys, I'm here to critique his use of G-Mod ragdoll posing. The plot is a secondary concern to me.
Good work with facial posing in some parts. Try to envision the emotion better, and work at it until you get it right.
Body posing is a little bit mechanical-looking. Try just adjusting the position of a few unmoved limbs slightly in all the ragdolls. You'd be surprised at how much more natural it looks.
Gun-in-hand and finger posing are by far the best jobs here. That's easily the hardest part of posing ragdolls in GMod, but you did it well.
Most of this is, I'm sure, due to you being new to G-Mod comicmaking. I'll give you a few strips to get used to it.
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Post by madcat42 on Oct 19, 2009 1:47:19 GMT 10
Liking it so far. Keep up the good work.
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Post by Oberstleutnant Insipid on Oct 19, 2009 12:56:22 GMT 10
I can't take seriously anything with wonky speechbubble tails.
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Post by CoolCorky on Oct 19, 2009 16:27:41 GMT 10
Yeah, that's fixed now. Meaning it will be for the next one.
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Post by CoolCorky on Oct 21, 2009 8:48:00 GMT 10
 Bonus points for anyone who can work out what they're talking about. |
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Post by iBishyT on Oct 21, 2009 11:26:02 GMT 10
Headcrabs?
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Post by The Pletch on Oct 21, 2009 12:37:08 GMT 10
That was my guess too.
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Post by Squirrel Hero on Oct 23, 2009 6:49:16 GMT 10
Most likely, yeah.
Or humans. (Half-Life 1)
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