Shiver
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Post by Shiver on Dec 25, 2007 9:28:31 GMT 10
Hm. Well-designed comic. Stylish and fairly easy (or at least non-difficult) to read speech bubbles. Well-selected poses. You've got some decent comic skills. The main problem is that it isn't funny. That's what I was lookin' for.I've been thinking of un-used funny plots lately.It's not that easy. |
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Shiver
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Post by Shiver on Dec 26, 2007 7:21:11 GMT 10
Issue 2 is done.I made an attempt at humor this time.  EDIT:And if you look close enough,you can see that Spyro's expressions change.A block of ice is the best role for someone with one sprite. XD |
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Post by spyrofox on Dec 26, 2007 7:25:15 GMT 10
I'm Frozen... XD PK's Head looks a little Strange on Panel 3 though.
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Post by Hunter on Dec 26, 2007 7:30:27 GMT 10
Pk head look a little jpg-ish on panel 3. And i can't see me...
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Shiver
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Post by Shiver on Dec 26, 2007 7:52:21 GMT 10
@spyro:Yeah,he's looking up,so I tilted the head a little.
@hunter:You weren't in this one.
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Post by Hunter on Dec 26, 2007 8:02:51 GMT 10
I noticed it  |
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Shiver
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Post by Shiver on Dec 26, 2007 10:51:56 GMT 10
Why does PK's head randomly blur? He was supposed to be looking up.I guess it doesn't really appear that way. |
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PK the Hedgehog
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Post by PK the Hedgehog on Dec 27, 2007 2:20:22 GMT 10
I WANT A HAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Suzuka Yamoni-R on Dec 27, 2007 2:27:47 GMT 10
All I can say is.....Transparency.
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Post by Hunter on Dec 27, 2007 2:33:15 GMT 10
What's wrong with the transparency?
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Post by Suzuka Yamoni-R on Dec 27, 2007 4:07:33 GMT 10
Who said there was anything wrong with it?
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Crash
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Post by Crash on Dec 27, 2007 4:55:33 GMT 10
Why did you say that, then?
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Post by Suzuka Yamoni-R on Dec 27, 2007 5:02:04 GMT 10
You know, why are we always commenting on each other?
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Post by ShardNet on Dec 27, 2007 5:08:13 GMT 10
You know, why are we always commenting on each other? *Joins in* Suzuka. And Shiver. Anyway, not bad. |
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Post by D00D64: AM I GONE OR WHAT on Dec 27, 2007 10:41:45 GMT 10
I WANT A HAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT'D BEE 5000000000 MUNIEZ(Shot) |
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