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Post by SchezoWegey on Feb 21, 2007 1:28:23 GMT 10
It's official, Schezo's on his period. And like it or not, you'll be forced to read Of Mice and Men for GCSE English. Try saying tl;dr to your English teacher when that happens. From the logs Kage showed me (Which gave me great lulz btw) I'd say you're closer to being on any sort of period than I am. Not to mention we're not reading Of Mice and Men, so I guess I don't really need to say tl;dr at all. gb2/stfu/ Neo, I don't like your comic because I don't find serious comics very entertaining. Because of the fact that I don't particularly like them, and therefore don't read them, I can't really give you any pointers on how to improve. |
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Post by Hayden on Feb 21, 2007 1:46:30 GMT 10
It's official, Schezo's on his period. And like it or not, you'll be forced to read Of Mice and Men for GCSE English. Try saying tl;dr to your English teacher when that happens. From the logs Kage showed me (Which gave me great lulz btw) I'd say you're closer to being on any sort of period than I am. Not to mention we're not reading Of Mice and Men, so I guess I don't really need to say tl;dr at all. gb2/stfu/ Neo, I don't like your comic because I don't find serious comics very entertaining. Because of the fact that I don't particularly like them, and therefore don't read them, I can't really give you any pointers on how to improve. Win. Now, BACK ONTO THE TOPIC OF PERIODS. |
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Post by somebody probably on Feb 21, 2007 2:51:15 GMT 10
I'm pretty sure that's what everyone said about Of Mice and Men and War and Peace... I must protest. Lennie was hilarious in the film version in Of Mice and Men, 'I CAN TEND THE WABBITS JORGJ-' 'BLAM'. GEORGE KILLS LENNIE!The above line of text may contain a spoiler. However, I know for a fact that some people doing the varied courses of English study different books. Like one of my friends at school did 'A series of short stories' or something. ... Then there's the side of, y'know, Of Mice and Men actually had quite a good story going on for it. |
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Feb 21, 2007 4:28:34 GMT 10
A little anticlimatic though..
*makes use of half-term holidays for Issue 1.3*
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Feb 21, 2007 11:08:55 GMT 10
Issue 1.3:  Some of you were probably guessing this connection, but that's not the full story (I'll leave that 'til Episode 2 or 3, if I ever get that far) |
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Post by Deathclawesome on Feb 21, 2007 11:17:24 GMT 10
Those seats look mighty unconfortable.
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Post by iBishyT on Feb 21, 2007 11:32:03 GMT 10
The writing is good, and fairly natural. My only problem is that the girl seems very confortable with opening up to a stranger who was following her previously.
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Post by The Pletch on Feb 21, 2007 12:55:39 GMT 10
PLOT DEVICES LOL
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Post by Deathclawesome on Feb 21, 2007 12:58:46 GMT 10
I believe Futurama already concieved of this plot, Neo.
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Post by Oberstleutnant Insipid on Feb 21, 2007 18:59:03 GMT 10
No, it's Neo 2.2 Hylan, OBVIOUSLY. *glares*
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Feb 24, 2007 10:23:31 GMT 10
I think that Dooms is right, from what I can make out.. It does take place a long time after the whole events of Hylan and Tiara.  o btw:  Am I the only one in thinking that I'm not using the right layout? I mean, I'm not getting a lot of stuff in just 8 panels... |
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Post by Breaker on Feb 24, 2007 15:07:39 GMT 10
No, you seem to be going on the right track. Too much covered in one comic can ruin it all.
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Post by Interrobang Pie on Feb 24, 2007 16:43:31 GMT 10
Is that humour I spy? Nope. =P
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Feb 24, 2007 20:19:37 GMT 10
It's not a comedy comic, it's a serious one. =P -edit- Had to reupload, was I the only one to notice I got the Issue number wrong?  |
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Post by D00D64: AM I GONE OR WHAT on Feb 25, 2007 5:24:25 GMT 10
I KNOW SEE NO-TING!
Seriously, I only see an "X..."
EDIT: Never mind, I see it now...
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