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Post by Daniel on Sept 12, 2006 4:18:25 GMT 10
Hello peoples. I am Danju Parker, sonics number one fan, please! lols, heres the comic:  Lols, The master emerald doesn't like coke... comic 2 coming soon... |
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Neo // Racing Stripe A/V
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Sept 12, 2006 4:19:51 GMT 10
I thought you said you weren't Danju DX
I actually like. Grammar needs work, but meh.
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Post by Daniel on Sept 12, 2006 4:23:49 GMT 10
My sonic characters called Danju, but im Daniel.
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Post by Deathclawesome on Sept 12, 2006 7:27:22 GMT 10
Not too good, I bet it'll improve.
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Post by Kanye West on Sept 12, 2006 7:28:45 GMT 10
Its okay, I like the humor, but fix your goddamn grammar  |
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I made that Fakemon! :D
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Post by PK the Hedgehog on Sept 12, 2006 7:29:35 GMT 10
Not too good, I bet it'll improve. IT STARTED OUT JUST LIKE MINE! But funny none-the-less |
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Post by Oberstleutnant Insipid on Sept 12, 2006 19:25:56 GMT 10
It is horrible.
Kill it please.
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Post by Kage on Sept 13, 2006 4:24:19 GMT 10
It is horrible. Kill it please. |
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Post by CoolCorky on Sept 13, 2006 4:32:14 GMT 10
Don't use IM/MB text in comics. Use it in MBs or IMs, hence the name.
Those explosions looke Eschery. Look at the one in the bottom right. The explosion is behind Danju, but in from of that platform, but Danju is on the platform. Explain?
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Post by somebody probably on Sept 13, 2006 4:33:28 GMT 10
Lack of humour, I chose you!
*Shot*
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Post by Vinushka on Sept 13, 2006 4:39:12 GMT 10
I can't really comment. It's so bad, any comments I give will be an understatement.
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Post by CoolCorky on Sept 13, 2006 4:43:21 GMT 10
I can't really comment. It's so bad, any comments I give will be an understatement. It isn't that bad. If it really was horrible, it would be like Matt's example of 'A Crappy Picture' for four panels straight. So lay off him, Blackbird. |
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Post by Sergeant Dull on Sept 13, 2006 4:49:34 GMT 10
Hello peoples. I am Danju Parker, sonics number one fan, please! lols, heres the comic: Lols, The master emerald doesn't like coke... comic 2 coming soon... I can see what you're getting at but you need to implement it better. |
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Post by Zerox on Sept 13, 2006 5:45:43 GMT 10
I've seen far worse. It's only the first issue, give the guy some room to improve, for pete's sake.
Hey, at least its not CHAOS XTRACT!! all over again...as hilarious as that was XD
You don't type *drinks* like that, you make the sprite doing the action. That's part of the point.
More grammar improvement required...oh, and why do the explosions go over the floor panels but behind the hedgehog standing on them? ( 3rd panel). Doesn't make a mass of sense to me.
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Post by Mysterious Bob on Sept 13, 2006 5:59:15 GMT 10
Hello peoples. I am Danju Parker, sonics number one fan, please! There's something wrong with you. Really. |
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