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Post by Daniel on Sept 1, 2006 5:26:21 GMT 10
new comic series:  sonic is very upset because his best mate, tails has got killed. (oh noes!!!)but sonic will avenge him...by killing the fat dick called eggman. |
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Post by Kage Samer '91 on Sept 1, 2006 5:37:20 GMT 10
Sonic doesn't swear...THAT'S NO GOOD!
Also, if his best friend has just died...Why does he look bored in the first panel?
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Post by Daniel on Sept 1, 2006 5:46:59 GMT 10
hes upset in the first panel, but he isent crying.
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Sept 1, 2006 7:04:40 GMT 10
..So he cries green tears in panel 3? It looks it here.  |
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Post by Mr. Ksoft on Sept 1, 2006 7:05:59 GMT 10
No, they're blue. I checked.
Possibly, this has potential, but I already feel like I missed something...
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Post by Fiery on Sept 1, 2006 7:09:54 GMT 10
What the HELL is chaos xtract? A liquid freshly squeezed from chaos that can be used to flavor pies?
....That sounds good, actually. *grabs a chao from the bin and puts it in the 'squeezer'*
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Post by somebody probably on Sept 1, 2006 7:10:30 GMT 10
HAHAHAHAHA! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! HHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Oh right, the story line's supposed to be serious. Whoops.
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Post by Naem on Sept 1, 2006 7:30:58 GMT 10
Sonic is incredibly OOC.
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Post by Sergeant Dull on Sept 1, 2006 7:39:58 GMT 10
Emo.
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Post by Deathclawesome on Sept 1, 2006 8:18:14 GMT 10
....That sounds good, actually. *grabs a chao from the bin and puts it in the 'squeezer'* Noooo!!! |
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Post by PK the Hedgehog on Sept 1, 2006 9:48:01 GMT 10
Ironically, this looks just like how I planned PT 1 of chaos emerald 7 would look like in the adventures of pokeshadow, except sonic was poke, and tails was amy
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Sept 1, 2006 9:51:26 GMT 10
K. Lots of fanfics have this sort of storyline, where the protaganist is somehow forced to go dark...
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Post by Deathclawesome on Sept 1, 2006 9:54:22 GMT 10
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Post by 4d3d3d3 on Sept 1, 2006 13:11:11 GMT 10
meh. I hate serious crap. Wrote a fanfic a year ago, mixed up plot, people liked it....
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Post by Zerox on Sept 1, 2006 18:22:16 GMT 10
Serious doesn't normally work well for sprite comics. It's much hardy to get effectively to work in such a format. Humour is the 'default' basis for a comic's existance.
"negitity"? WTF is that meant to mean?
Improve your grammar using caps etc. Sloppy grammar will ruin it for you. As well as stealing Adventure styled sprites from MFZ without hinting at any credit at all.
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