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Post by Zerox on Aug 25, 2006 3:36:30 GMT 10
Issue one, a double as a sort of introductiony thing. Where they'll end up should be pretty obvious.  Doubt this'll get as popular as LOL waffles, but I'll try my best. Issue two. I'm sure this is more obvious now...  O NOES! TEH EVIL PIKACHU!  Pikachu will regret doing that...  One thing after another, isn't it?  I'd run too, what with the evil red text. I'd add blur, but I'm using paint. So sue me then. Actually, don't.  Nothings gone right for them since they got here, has it? Well, not for Sonic...  |
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Post by Sergeant Dull on Aug 25, 2006 3:53:16 GMT 10
....What?
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Aug 25, 2006 6:30:22 GMT 10
^Or maybe in the Sonic/Pokémon one?
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Post by somebody probably on Aug 25, 2006 7:56:47 GMT 10
Le critique:
Right, the text should be at least readable, so that readers don't have to strain their eyes to see it.
It doesn't seem to have a lot of humor in it... Which generally makes a good sprite comic, not always, but unless you have some kick-arse life-owning plot, you're gonna want to add something to make us laugh. Also, typos, something you should really look to avoid. XD
Meh, at least the graphics look fairly cleanly done. >.>
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Post by Sergeant Dull on Aug 26, 2006 1:24:32 GMT 10
No, when I said what...I meant...What the hell just happened?
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Post by Zerox on Aug 26, 2006 2:13:15 GMT 10
What ahppoened is Sonic and Shadow are fighting (over the Master Emerald, possibly) and Shadow gets fed up and just wants to end it. But the sensitivity of the Master Emerald wioth the Chaos Control forced Shad in too.
I might be slow for a while, just bought Ratchet Gladiator.
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Post by Sergeant Dull on Aug 26, 2006 3:07:34 GMT 10
Doesn't make sense, never happened in the games =(
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Post by Sergeant Dull on Aug 26, 2006 4:52:26 GMT 10
Shadow used Chaos Control! Master Emerald f*cks the planet over! Right  |
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Post by D on Aug 26, 2006 5:16:14 GMT 10
....WHaaaaAaaa?
I mean you have your speach boxes pretty big but the text is this bloody small and dithered! ARG! Know how to do text!
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Post by Oberstleutnant Insipid on Aug 26, 2006 19:29:14 GMT 10
Yeah, would be better if text was bigger.
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Post by Zerox on Aug 30, 2006 4:57:23 GMT 10
I tried to make it small enough so that it would fit reasonably in them if I wanted a fairly lengthy message in it. I can't undither it either. The more 'advanced' computers enjoy f*cking it up like that just to annoy us. B*oody thing.
Hey, it's only the first comic. Don't be too harsh with critiqe plz. Hell, I just needed a silly excuse for the comic to take place. You'll see later. I'll do another...eventually...when I'm not excessively playing RG. Plus I haven't been here for 4 days odd. And won't have time tomorrow night either. Flip.
EDIT: New comic
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Post by Zerox on Sept 1, 2006 3:09:52 GMT 10
Well, since edits are stupid and don't count as a new post, I'll do this one (excuse it) to declare the existence of the second one.
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Post by Sergeant Dull on Sept 1, 2006 3:14:34 GMT 10
It funnied me.
Difficult level.
If you want, make the screens biggerererer and have normal textboxes, or go for a typical Pokémon letterbox.
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Post by Zerox on Sept 1, 2006 4:38:37 GMT 10
Typical letterbox would be worse, take up more space, maybe I'll try normal textboxes with coloured text. I thought the boxes were big enough. In 2, there was only black around it as the room is only that large anyway.
Maybe I should do a box formation with 6 panels. But 4 is more default. The amount I need may differ, but...*sighs*
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Post by Zerox on Sept 2, 2006 0:41:04 GMT 10
Well, 'nother update. Starting to take shape now.
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