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Post by Daniel on Aug 18, 2006 22:08:39 GMT 10
I'm practicing to make a comic thats hand drawn, but i need opinions, of this picture:  this is Danny, a Chao character in my comic, i know he's chubby(he's well fed) but he is my loyal companion. (picture made from scratch) |
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Post by Kage on Aug 18, 2006 22:10:51 GMT 10
You stole my thread name you ass.
Eh, it's not bad...
As in, not make me explode with horror bad. I'm not fond of the shading, it looks to rough around the edges. And The eyes just look wrong.
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Post by Daniel on Aug 18, 2006 22:12:01 GMT 10
he's a happy chao, his eyes are happy.
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Post by Tené on Aug 18, 2006 22:23:31 GMT 10
I pretty much completely agree with Sho. Also, pillow shading.
Try to draw things more rounded. Also, when you go over them, use a tool which can blur the outlines. Plus, instead of pillow shading, start with a solid colour then darken areas which should be shadowed.
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Post by Sergeant Dull on Aug 18, 2006 22:37:56 GMT 10
Anti-aliasing would be good, shading could be better. Pretty much what Sho said. And Tené
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Aug 18, 2006 23:24:42 GMT 10
I can't see the image. Firefox gave up on it >>;
And yes I can draw. *points to topic title*
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Post by Daniel on Aug 18, 2006 23:57:49 GMT 10
im making another picture now
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Post by Monty Eggman on Aug 18, 2006 23:59:45 GMT 10
Where is it?
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Aug 19, 2006 0:00:55 GMT 10
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Post by Daniel on Aug 19, 2006 0:16:46 GMT 10
im still making the new picture
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Aug 19, 2006 0:19:33 GMT 10
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Post by Daniel on Aug 19, 2006 0:39:40 GMT 10
ok, new art: its daniel the hedgehog, witch is me:  hope its better then that chao. |
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Aug 19, 2006 0:41:16 GMT 10
You're a witch?  |
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Post by Kage Samer '91 on Aug 19, 2006 0:54:23 GMT 10
I wasn't aware Stretch Armstrong had a hedgehog form.
I also have no idea why someone would buy glasses, which don't even fit over their eyes.
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Post by Daniel on Aug 19, 2006 0:58:03 GMT 10
on sonic riders, they wear small glasses on there heads.
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