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Post by Metallix on Aug 11, 2006 11:42:38 GMT 10
Well this comic of mine is already on MFZ and a fair few other forums I visit so I thought Id post it here and see what you guys think of it  Issue 1 -  Issue 2 -  Issue 3 -  Issue 4 -  Issue 5 -  Issue 6 -  Issue 7 -  |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 11, 2006 11:49:00 GMT 10
Not too bad. I actually like it a bit.
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Post by The Bastard Son of Santa on Aug 11, 2006 12:08:36 GMT 10
Episodes 1, 5, 6 and 7 were funny.
This series is very good, I'd like to see more.
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Post by Vinushka on Aug 11, 2006 12:10:24 GMT 10
Not so bad, Metallix. But I can't really say I like it that much.
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Post by Kage Samer '91 on Aug 11, 2006 12:33:27 GMT 10
I didn't really like it. I don't see the point in serious comics myself, and the parts that were actually intended to be humorous, weren't all that funny.
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Post by Oberstleutnant Insipid on Aug 11, 2006 20:49:01 GMT 10
The grammar is awful.
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Post by Zerox on Aug 11, 2006 21:13:11 GMT 10
If you think that's bad I've seen hell. Mostly good and humorous, but slight grammar improvements would be good, as well as better text boxes. Keep it up! |
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Post by Monty Eggman on Aug 11, 2006 21:59:39 GMT 10
Well, not many of my comics were really that funny when I started making them, but, as you can see, I've improved over time.
If you improve a little on the grammar (I suggest typing up the captions in Word first, then Spell Check) and maybe the type of font, you might be able to make some really good issues. Still, it's not too bad. In fact, I like it, myself.
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Post by Mysterious Bob on Aug 11, 2006 23:35:07 GMT 10
Not bad at all. Well made and no crappy fan characters.
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Post by Sergeant Dull on Aug 12, 2006 1:01:18 GMT 10
I think it's ok, could be a bit funnier, the jokes you tried didn't make me all that...laughy. Layout is nice. Try a new banner.
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Aug 12, 2006 1:28:23 GMT 10
Not bad. pretty much like 16-Bit Stupidity, without the stereotypes  |
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Post by metaler on Aug 12, 2006 5:27:20 GMT 10
Interesting comic. I liked it. You just need to improve your grammar.  |
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Post by therealshadow on Aug 12, 2006 11:35:34 GMT 10
not bad at all me likey, me likey
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