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Post by Fenix on Jun 22, 2006 2:50:47 GMT 10
 A very lame intro to the comic. I tried, and failed. Made in MS paint. Okay, if you want to join, supply an advance sprite sheet please. People: SB: Dark: Blue text box. Sho: Neutral: Green text box. FE: Good: Brown Text box. Neo: Good: Black text box: White writing. Dagger: Good: Dark brown text box. Ocrillo: Good: Dark Red text box. Deonfox: Neutral: Dark Orange text box. |
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Post by Kage on Jun 22, 2006 2:53:11 GMT 10
Not very funny, but it's nice and clean. Especially the speech-bubbles. Just add a little more humour and it'll be great.
Good luck with it.
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Post by Fenix on Jun 22, 2006 2:56:02 GMT 10
Wow. A comment from Kage that is POSITIVE? Cool. And I am actually teh sucakge when it comes to humour, so if any thinks they can help me with the odd humour thing, add me to MSN, and we will talk over a 'trade' as such...
P.S. I will clean some things up Kage.
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Post by Kage on Jun 22, 2006 2:59:17 GMT 10
plot+humor+style=ZOMG TEH CHAOS DISORDERS.
Meh, I don't mind. This comic seems pretty good.
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Jun 22, 2006 4:18:40 GMT 10
Why is the last speech bubble made by Sho (or ktm at the moment) lacking a question mark.
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Post by Fenix on Jun 22, 2006 4:20:24 GMT 10
Would not fit on... <.<
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Jun 22, 2006 4:29:49 GMT 10
You could make the text box THEN put the border on. Just have "Draw Opaque" on.
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Post by Demonfox on Jun 22, 2006 5:02:01 GMT 10
MY TITLE. D: I SHALL SMITE THEE.
JK, nice comics, as Kage said, has a clean look to it. Good luck.
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Post by Fenix on Jun 24, 2006 3:01:41 GMT 10
Sorry, forgot about your title. Anyway, I have named my comic the LISV, meaning Life in Sonic Vegemite. It shows us all from SV, going around the planet in search of the Server that keeps SV running. I will continue this when I get a few more people, and Neo is making me a banner now. EDIT: Comic is out:  Looking for more people still, tell me your alliance and colr of bubble and text. EDIT 2: I suck at humour... If you have seen the flash 'Skittlez and KIPPERSz' you will get the joke in the first panel. |
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Jun 24, 2006 20:08:34 GMT 10
It's alright, but not too funny..
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Post by Juddy [CyclonicCircuit] on Jun 25, 2006 0:43:53 GMT 10
I'll join. Advance sheet here.Red (slightly darker) bubble plz. Edit 999999999999999*shot*: Good. I'm good everywhere else, so... yeah. |
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Post by Fenix on Jun 25, 2006 1:03:11 GMT 10
Okay, added, but I am trying to make this a Megadrive comic, so if you CAN supply MD, I would rather use them, but GBA will do me too...
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Post by Juddy [CyclonicCircuit] on Jun 25, 2006 19:04:54 GMT 10
Ahem... O-C-R-I-L-I-O, not two Ls.
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Post by Fenix on Jun 25, 2006 19:12:27 GMT 10
... MD SPRITES!
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Post by Demonfox on Jun 25, 2006 19:27:42 GMT 10
I think these are good. Not hilarious, but it gives off a slight "South Park" comedic value.
ME PLZ! I'll post the sprites if you can't find them. Or I'll put them in my sig in a few minutes. >>
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