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Post by WDot on Jul 31, 2004 7:34:20 GMT 10
NickBEC: 7.3/10 Good, but you need to check your grammar a bit.
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Post by Neo_cydude on Aug 5, 2004 1:34:29 GMT 10
Eats n00bs
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Post by WDot on Aug 5, 2004 9:42:16 GMT 10
Neo: A good idea, but not an entrance.
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Post by Neo_cydude on Aug 7, 2004 23:11:52 GMT 10
Eats Wdot
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Post by Tené on Aug 8, 2004 2:49:15 GMT 10
In the middle of a place similar to nowhere, a solitary figure crawls through the the arid desert. Little can be seen about this figure, except that it resembles a hedgehog and seems to have been half eaten. To the figure's astonishment, everything around it lights up in a kind of fiery glow. Looking around, it sees nothing. But it then looks up, and sees something almost, but not quite, like a meteor hurtling towards it. It recognises the creature that was the focus of the fire flying to the earth. it was a dark red echidna, with stripes. The half-eaten figure tries its best efforts to run, but doesn't make it. Though the echidna stops a few feet above the ground, its flame keeps going, burning the poor figure to the tune of maniacal laughter. Tenebrais is yet to get tired of fire.
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Post by Neo_cydude on Aug 11, 2004 5:07:31 GMT 10
booring
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