Shiver
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Post by Shiver on Sept 24, 2007 10:47:56 GMT 10
I've made a few hoaxes for the next update.I didn't put a whole day towards these,but they look okay to me.Here they are. -old "Self insert?" -old Yep.That's my desk. -old When Eggman Gets A Budget Cut no.1,crappy bosses.I bet that would've been a lot easier. -old That's my version of Sonic Heroes Advance,along with custom characters of mine. -old It's a Sonic Riders game Genesis styled.With me. ;D -old Answers:1)The shading on the "Egg Utopia"' eyes is backwards. 2)The blue Chaos Emeralds have switched places. 3)The path leading to the Extra Zone is supposed to have orange dots. -old I call it Sonic Nitro.This stage is Reaper Base. -old Another Sonic Nitro hoax.This one's called Volcanic Ruin. -old And the title card for the hoax above. -old Estel and Sonic in Toy Kingdom (or something). -old Transparent Zone.I don't think this stage would be playable... -old This is what happens when you fall from space. -old It's SA2's "The Last Battle" Sonic Advancified! -old It's Brass Knuckles part 1. -old And part 2.You can imagine part 3 on your own. -old Because I was bored,and it's never been done before >.> -old Another self insert.Shoot me. This is the archive,so you don't have to go searching through the thread to find 'em all.Each time I make one,I'll add it.
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Post by eddo on Sept 24, 2007 10:50:45 GMT 10
1) It would look better if you made the screen size right and make the text more like the game. 8/10
2)Good job, but add foreground and I'll 10/10 it. 9/10
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Shiver
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Post by Shiver on Sept 24, 2007 10:53:18 GMT 10
Foreground?
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Post by Interrobang Pie on Sept 24, 2007 16:31:32 GMT 10
The bit you and Sonic are standing on in your sig. =P
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Post by Shiver on Sept 25, 2007 5:04:13 GMT 10
Okay,I've resized the hoaxes correctly,and modified them to make them look better.I've also added the first hoax in the series "When Eggman Gets A Budget Cut".
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Post by Interrobang Pie on Sept 25, 2007 5:15:36 GMT 10
TEXTINHOAXNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *shot*
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Post by D00D64: AM I GONE OR WHAT on Sept 25, 2007 5:43:55 GMT 10
Just put it in the file name; there is no need for text in hoax.
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Shiver
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Post by Shiver on Sept 25, 2007 6:02:16 GMT 10
Just put it in the file name; there is no need for text in hoax. I did.Shiver is saying that _in_ the hoax.
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Post by eddo on Sept 25, 2007 6:17:03 GMT 10
He meant the new one.
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Post by Shiver on Sept 25, 2007 6:22:53 GMT 10
Oh.Well,it's just explainig stuff.The image alone wouldn't tell you what's going on.
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Post by Neo // Racing Stripe A/V on Sept 25, 2007 7:28:23 GMT 10
Just say underneath the hoax.
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Post by Suzuka Yamoni-R on Sept 25, 2007 7:29:29 GMT 10
Text in a hoax? NOOOOO!!! *shot* Other two hoaxes:7/10
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Post by Shiver on Sept 25, 2007 12:02:11 GMT 10
Okay,I remade the "When Eggman Gets A Budget Cut" thing.I'll remember not to put text in hoaxes like that.Also,I've added a new one. Characters in order from left to right:Spine,Chain,Veresis,DETH,Sandstorm,and Spearox.My comment is in the first post.
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Post by Interrobang Pie on Sept 25, 2007 15:56:35 GMT 10
What is wrong with that guys head? It looks like some giant ring has been engraved into it. =P Otherwise, the hoax is good. 4/5
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Post by titan on Sept 26, 2007 6:25:30 GMT 10
The author's desk one is pretty good.
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