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Is that Cream enlarged big and shouting?
Also, AAA is a type of battery. *steals* AAAH is a yelp.
EDIT: Dairy products - I really can't imagine dairy flavours. And strawberries aren't dairy products. And vanilla's a plant. S'pose Cheese and Cream works.
Wait, why am I going on about this anyway?
And wheres Knuckles in the 3rd frame?
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Joined: Sept 2007 Gender: Male  Posts: 480 Karma: 12 |  | Re: Sonic The Comic. My sprite comic! « Reply #2 on May 2, 2008, 4:21pm » | |
- Bad speech bubbles. - Make Cream's and Teen Cream's text colors different. The fourth panel confused me because I thought it was Cream shouting. - Use Advance BGs with Advance sprites. - Typos. - See O-TC's last sentence.
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Crappy, Times New Roman speech bubbles. Typo(s). Pathetic attempt at being funny. Bitmixing. Dreadfully resized fire sprites. Knuckles missing in Panel 3. And the panels have an erratic arrangement. Make the spaces in between them the same.
And to say this is #39, I dread to hink what the rest are like...
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|  | Re: Sonic The Comic. My sprite comic! « Reply #4 on May 3, 2008, 5:35am » | |
There's 10 more to look at. And I forgot to put Knuckles in there. I'll see if I can mess with the word bubbles after the 50th comic, because that will be starting season two. And don't go all " Hey, dipwad! Comics don't have seasons!", I know that. It's just fun to make seasons.
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May 3, 2008, 5:35am, boyue wrote:| And don't go all " Hey, dipwad! Comics don't have seasons!", I know that. It's just fun to make seasons. |
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...What do you mean they didn't? Some do you know. Heck, chapters kind of count as seasons too.
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![[homepage] [homepage]](http://s2.images.proboards.com/buttons/www_sm.gif) Joined: Jun 2006 Gender: Male  Posts: 4,491 Location: UK Karma: -8,388,607 |  | Re: Sonic The Comic. My sprite comic! « Reply #6 on May 3, 2008, 6:23am » | |
Just take a look at SCFH.
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Joined: Oct 2005 Gender: Male  Posts: 1,590 Location: Co-ordinates 13.8 Karma: -69 |  | Re: Sonic The Comic. My sprite comic! « Reply #7 on May 3, 2008, 6:41am » | |
WTBBFAHF (despite not being updated since February) is spanning 3 Episodes at least. OSHI-spoiler
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WTBBFAHF? I can vaguely remember what that was about.
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Joined: Oct 2005 Gender: Male  Posts: 1,590 Location: Co-ordinates 13.8 Karma: -69 |  | Re: Sonic The Comic. My sprite comic! « Reply #9 on May 3, 2008, 7:30am » | |
..Yeah, I really need to finish #1.10 and Episode 1 as a whole.... >_>;;;;
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BNI came in waves. <.<
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May 3, 2008, 6:23am, CoolCorky wrote:| Just take a look at SCFH. |
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Yay, I'm appreciated!
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Joined: Jun 2007 Gender: Male  Posts: 1,451 Location: Yo' Face Karma: 6 |  | Re: Sonic The Comic. My sprite comic! « Reply #12 on May 4, 2008, 8:01am » | |
I'm surprised no one mentioned the unoriginal name.
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|  | Re: Sonic The Comic. My sprite comic! « Reply #13 on May 4, 2008, 11:59am » | |
I know it's unoriginal. It's just that I made it up before I remembered about it. When I did, it,well, just stuck to the comic. No one really cared. Update!: ![[image] [image]](http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/2504/stc40io1.png)
Srry for blank space, don't complain.
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|  | Re: Sonic The Comic. My sprite comic! « Reply #14 on May 4, 2008, 1:05pm » | |
No fun No jokes No order No Story No good balloons No Bit-Matching Eggman No Bit-Matching Background No Explanation about the boo No need for self insert I guess I'm TURNING JAPANESE!
Cookie for ref. Roby might know this one
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