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« Thread Started on May 2, 2008, 11:08am »

Okay, this is my sprite comic. I'm going to leave off at the beggining of the SA2B storyline.

39. Sibling rivalries
40. Sonic adventure 2 Battle
41. intruder alert
41. All your base
42. Shadow =Genie?


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Oh, and Sonic is very afraid of fire.
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« Reply #1 on May 2, 2008, 3:40pm »

Is that Cream enlarged big and shouting?

Also, AAA is a type of battery. *steals* AAAH is a yelp.

EDIT: Dairy products - I really can't imagine dairy flavours. And strawberries aren't dairy products. And vanilla's a plant. S'pose Cheese and Cream works.

Wait, why am I going on about this anyway?

And wheres Knuckles in the 3rd frame?
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« Reply #2 on May 2, 2008, 4:21pm »

- Bad speech bubbles.
- Make Cream's and Teen Cream's text colors different. The fourth panel confused me because I thought it was Cream shouting.
- Use Advance BGs with Advance sprites.
- Typos.
- See O-TC's last sentence.
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« Reply #3 on May 3, 2008, 1:09am »

Crappy, Times New Roman speech bubbles.
Typo(s).
Pathetic attempt at being funny.
Bitmixing.
Dreadfully resized fire sprites.
Knuckles missing in Panel 3.
And the panels have an erratic arrangement. Make the spaces in between them the same.

And to say this is #39, I dread to hink what the rest are like...
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« Reply #4 on May 3, 2008, 5:35am »

There's 10 more to look at. And I forgot to put Knuckles in there.
I'll see if I can mess with the word bubbles after the 50th comic, because that will be starting season two. And don't go all " Hey, dipwad! Comics don't have seasons!", I know that. It's just fun to make seasons.
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« Reply #5 on May 3, 2008, 6:07am »


May 3, 2008, 5:35am, boyue wrote:
And don't go all " Hey, dipwad! Comics don't have seasons!", I know that. It's just fun to make seasons.

...What do you mean they didn't? Some do you know. Heck, chapters kind of count as seasons too.
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« Reply #6 on May 3, 2008, 6:23am »

Just take a look at SCFH.
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« Reply #7 on May 3, 2008, 6:41am »

WTBBFAHF (despite not being updated since February) is spanning 3 Episodes at least.
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« Reply #8 on May 3, 2008, 6:47am »

WTBBFAHF? I can vaguely remember what that was about.
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« Reply #9 on May 3, 2008, 7:30am »

..Yeah, I really need to finish #1.10 and Episode 1 as a whole.... >_>;;;;
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« Reply #10 on May 3, 2008, 6:51pm »

BNI came in waves. <.<
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« Reply #11 on May 3, 2008, 7:36pm »


May 3, 2008, 6:23am, CoolCorky wrote:
Just take a look at SCFH.


Yay, I'm appreciated! ;D
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« Reply #12 on May 4, 2008, 8:01am »

I'm surprised no one mentioned the unoriginal name.
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« Reply #13 on May 4, 2008, 11:59am »

I know it's unoriginal. It's just that I made it up before I remembered about it. When I did, it,well, just stuck to the comic. No one really cared.
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Srry for blank space, don't complain.
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« Reply #14 on May 4, 2008, 1:05pm »

No fun
No jokes
No order
No Story
No good balloons
No Bit-Matching Eggman
No Bit-Matching Background
No Explanation about the boo
No need for self insert
I guess I'm TURNING JAPANESE!

Cookie for ref. Roby might know this one
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